12-30-201108:37 AM
@Tank the Aggron your name as been added to the list.:3
And I also like bacon.>;D
Oh by the way, I just read Chapter 1 of 'Better Late Than Never'.; u ;
Very wonderful indeed!!:D
Though I find you made Ash seem like Red (from the video games) when he was 12.xD Though I sort of like it like that personally, makes Ash seem badassed.;D
The only think I would change would be this line;
[i]'All he had to do now was finish off the rest of the fools in this tournament and then… uh… create lots of little Charmanders with Charla.'[/i]
When I read that I was like, what? o . o LOL.
I also like how you make Brock extra perverted.xD LOLOLOLOLOL.~
And you also made the battling scene's wonderful.~ I'm ususally not a huge fan of battling scenes, I'll just skip through it very fast, but you've written it very well!:D
Well I didn't bother reviewing it on FF, since I am reviewing it here.> u > But if you want me too, I can!:3
Anyway's, can't wait for chapter 2 to come out. c:
And I also like bacon.>;D
Oh by the way, I just read Chapter 1 of 'Better Late Than Never'.; u ;
Very wonderful indeed!!:D
Though I find you made Ash seem like Red (from the video games) when he was 12.xD Though I sort of like it like that personally, makes Ash seem badassed.;D
The only think I would change would be this line;
[i]'All he had to do now was finish off the rest of the fools in this tournament and then… uh… create lots of little Charmanders with Charla.'[/i]
When I read that I was like, what? o . o LOL.
I also like how you make Brock extra perverted.xD LOLOLOLOLOL.~
And you also made the battling scene's wonderful.~ I'm ususally not a huge fan of battling scenes, I'll just skip through it very fast, but you've written it very well!:D
Well I didn't bother reviewing it on FF, since I am reviewing it here.> u > But if you want me too, I can!:3
Anyway's, can't wait for chapter 2 to come out. c: